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Lanaya



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PostSubject: Shadowfax.   Thu Aug 01, 2013 4:49 pm

Shadowfax

Gender: Female

Species: Batpony

Mane: Black

Tail: Black

Eyes: Golden-Yellow

Body:Grey

Cutie Mark: Shield with Lunar Moon

Age (Baby,adult): Adult

Personality: Shadowfax is a hard working, modest pony. She tends to be more quiet. unless you interest her, but warms up when you get to know her. She's very friendly and optimistic but can change to a very hard edged pony if the situation gets bad. She loves to meet new ponies and party, when off duty.

Special Talent: Fighting/Protection

Likes: Nice ponies. Parties, and party accessories. Rock and Roll. Full Moon nights. Flying. Ponies with Common Sense. Pears and Oranges!

Dislikes: Arrogance, random/weird ponies, insults. Bright sunny days. Crime and ill behavior.

History: Shadowfax grew up in the Manehattan slums secluded from other ponies, except for her family. She was an only child, for a long time until her sister was born, and spent most of her days flying and exploring than playing with the other foals, whom were scared of her and made fun of her. She had a hard life and walked the line between good and criminal, but after seeing a guard pony stop a thief she became obsessed with the guard. She would even pretend she was a guard pony protecting Equestria from crime as a game. When her sister, Sonar Moonlight, was born she saw it as her duty to protect her from bullies and the bad influence of the slums, and stayed by her side at almost all times. When she grew up she left home and her family, wandering around looking for a place she could fit in. On her Odysseus, she befriended lots of ponies and gained her social skills that she didn't have as a foal. After the return of Luna and the Lunar guard reopening, she went to canterlot and joined up to fulfill her dream of being a Guard pony. She lives in Canterlot now, severing Equestria or having a great time. When she's not too busy or has a vacation, she has her little sister to come over stay with her.


Example RP segment: A colt is bullying a filly in the Manehattan street. When your OC looks to him, he turns to your OC and snaps, "What're you looking at?" Given your OC’s personality, compose a brief narrative in which your OC identifies and addresses the situation.

I was walking off duty through the streets of Manehattan, enjoying the nice breeze when a sudden cry stops me in my tracks. I turn and see little filly cornered on a wall being yelled at by a colt while a group of foals stand and watch. I feel a surge of anger and part the small crowd, stepping up behind the colt.

"What're you looking at?"

I flare my wings and glare down at him.

"A little punk asking for trouble.. are you asking for trouble?"

The colt steps away startled, and quickly shakes his head, before running away. I smile at the little filly and give a nod, before continuing down street.

Harmony


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PostSubject: Re: Shadowfax.   Thu Aug 01, 2013 4:53 pm

Well you need a pic for starters and the word on the bottom is wrong.

You also need to add the Special Talent: thingy and I noticed that it does not say the OC's name at the top of the post itself. (not the name of the topic) =D

Do that, and you are golden.

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PostSubject: Re: Shadowfax.   Thu Aug 01, 2013 5:12 pm

Can't a gal copy and paste? Fixed and will add in a picture soon

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PostSubject: Re: Shadowfax.   Thu Aug 01, 2013 5:17 pm

Approved

Have fun protecting Luna =D

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